I had my first kiss today.
It was cold and tasted of Fan Yogo.
It happened under the bele-ball tree behind our house.
He said, "everyone says you are my girl friend so I am going to kiss you, okay"
So I said yes.
Mummy said that your first kiss makes you tingly.
All I could feel were the ants climbing over my slippers and trying to run up my leg.
I tried to shake them off and kicked him.
He yelped and pushed me.
I fell hard on my bum.
It hurt.
So I cried.
He came and "begged" me.
Rubbing my head this way and that.
When I did not stop, he put his arm around me and sat on the leaves beside me.
The ants climbed all over him but he did not care.
Then, he bent his head and kissed me.
I stopped crying.
Then he gave me the rest of his Fan Yogo.
It had almost all melted.
Then he pulled me up and we played catcher-catcher all afternoon.
It was the best day ever.
22 comments:
awwwwww... this is cute!!
Seems like a nice young man to me....he was going to brave the ants to get that kiss lol. I like!!!
This was a beautiful write up! Short and sweet.
That's probably your husband. LOL.
My first kiss... pphhhsssttt. I'll never tell that story. Embarrassing!
I hope he grew up to be that sweet. :)
Love the write up.
Lovely cute short one. The little boy sure brought a smile to my face.
Nice!
Makes pleasant memories for the kisser and the kisee...
Instead of feeling tingly she had ants climb up her leg. lol!
Nice short story.
so cute....so vivid...
Very cute indeed! Excellent imagery.
kai, dat boy correct eh! even after u kick am! better man!
i have no recollection of my own first kiss. i guess it wasn't a sweet experience
I am so amused...how nice.
I am trying so had here to remember my first kiss-lol
hmmmmmmmmmmm this is romantic
lol
Aww ssuuueeet!
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well, congrats.
mine is on its way ;)
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