Wednesday, November 19, 2008

XYLOPHONE IN G MINOR




Hair

No hair

Laugh

no laugh

cry

no cry

smile

no smile

slim

not slim

fat

not fat

dance

can't dance

me,

myselves

and I



Used

not used

tired

not tired

hungry

not hungry

dreamer

can't dream

sing

don't sing

please don't sing

me,

myselves

and I




sex

no sex

want

can't want

not wanted

won't want

move

no move

stop

don't stop

beg

don't beg

fear

oh dear

me,

myselves

and I




sounds

no sounds

music

no frowns

keys

beat

love

laughter

heat

me,

myselves

and I




who?

not who

what

yes, what

know

don't know

shake

shake

shake

me,

myselves

and I


It's me...
It's me....
It's me...
It's me, myselves and I....

14 comments:

Naapali said...

Its Catwalq alright.

miz-cynic said...

DEFINITELY CATWALQ

darkelcee said...

maybe its me. loll howdy?

bArOquE said...

& why do i think it is not just you, yourself & you?

SHE said...

words and opposite

catwalq

dogrun

its you, and them, and it!

Mogaji said...

SInce you used 'myselves' repeatedly I'm thinking it's a play on words. Maybe about the different personalities each person exhibits?

NigerianDramaQueen said...

-Nice!

maitumbi said...

you shd do poetry more often. i enjoyed this

Jaycee said...

I really enjoyed this...

As I scrolled down, I felt like my heart was in G-minor...

Emeka Amakeze said...

Hell no! That was me! Well, that could be then. Wouldn't that be me?

Jaja said...

you have a fine ear for rhythm. beat. cadence. and the play of words.. I enjoyed.. not like i care what u meant.

InCogNaija said...

this is subject to interpretation...i like my interpretation. lol!

SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

are you sure its not me?

N.I.M.M.O said...

Maybe it was me.

Not me?

Maybe We? Abi Us?

Not We?

Whoever it is sha, it was nice.