Saturday, August 02, 2008

Greener Pastures

Labake picked through the huge tray of rice slowly. She sought malformed and darkened grains and flicked them off her tray onto the dirt beyond the verandah where the chickens helped themselves to them as a meal. Her head was bent and face hidden but it would have been apparent to anyone watching her that all was not well. For one, her normally proud shoulders were slumped and she seemed surrounded by an air of fatigue and sad defeat.

Her daughter, Eyiwunmi was no where to be found. For the past three days, she had been avoiding her mother and Labake in turn had been ignoring her thirteen year old. The house had been shrouded in a foul and uncomfortable silence since their bitter exchange of words when Eyinwunmi brought her daugher home from the taxi car park whn she returned from her trip to Lagos. Both were in a place emotionally that in their darkest nightmares could have imagined that they would be.

From the corner of eye, Labake saw a form coming towards her. She looked up slowly, mentally preparing herself for the conversation from yet another visitor come to welcome Eyiwunmi back from her trip and to see for themselves what a person just returned from Lagos looked like. For almost every one in Igede Ekiti, Lagos was the mecca of all cities and Labake and her daughter were much envied for the opportunity that the girl had had to visit and stay for a whole month. Even Pastor Ajidagba, the town priest had only stayed for four days. So, Eyiwunmi was the town's hottest topic especially as some witnesses had indicated that she had arrived clad in oyinbo clothes and her head full of oyinbo hair.

It was Motunrayo or Mama Olumide as she was called by everyone and Labake's friend for twenty of her thirty eight years. She walked with a limp, her right leg deadened from a deforming case of polio when she was two. In left hand was her signature walking stick that she leaned heavily on as she hobbled her way over to her friend. Labake neither put her tray down nor rise to meet her friend. Motun smiled softly to herself as she reached the shade of the verandah.

"Ore mi, bawo?[1]" she asked in greeting. Labake raised her head and Motun gasped when she saw that her friend had been crying.
"Ha!" she exclaimed, "Mama Wunmi, don't be like that..."
Labake shook her head slowly as if with profound sorrow, "How can you say that when one's own child decides to put pepper in her eyes?"
Sighing, Motunrayo lowered herself onto the verandah floor so that her legs were spread out in front of her. She reached over and placed her hand on her friend's thigh.
"Wunmi came to me this morning and told me what happened...."
"Did she say what she said?" Labake interrupted, "Did that ungrateful thing tell you what she said?" she put down the tray suddenly and began to tap her feet in anger. "You were right, I should never had let her go to her father's house. Trust him to turn him against me."
Motunrayo shook her head, "She has not been turned against you. She just wants to go live with him."
Labake rested her head in her hands, "What can she know that she is doing? All she sees is the flashy, flashy things. She does not remember that he has not come to look for her since she was born." she turned to her friend, "remember, he almost did not come for her naming ceremony?"
Motunrayo nodded, memory causing her to sigh.
"And that woman...!" Labake grimaced, "Does she think that Beatrice will be nice to her? She spent only one month and thinks that living with them will be pleasant. Omo yen kan se oju aye ni.[2]"
"Be e ni" Motun nodded in agreement, "But I say you let her go."
Labake whirled on her friend, nearly unsettling herself on her small stool and upseting the tray of rice. "Iru kantan kantan wo lo n so yi[3]? What kind of nonsense are you talking? Have you been listening to me?"
Motun smiled, "I have heard you and I agree with you. I have also heard her and agreed with her. She says her father has told her that he will start to pay for her school fees and all her expenses. Think of the better life she will be able to get when she goes to a Lagos school. How much can she grow here? And maybe seeing her has reminded him of his responsibilities. O sa mo bi awon okunrin se je.[4] Out of sight is out of mind."
Labake hiss was her only response.
"Yes she has been enticed by the life in Lagos," Motun continued, "but she also deserves to have a relationship with her father. We thank God that he is not dead. He is alive and she should take anything he can give. You know you can use with the help. I mean, look at where you are...." she gestured towards the old and fading bungalow that had once belonged to Labake's late father, "where we both are."
Labake looked at her friend as if she was just seeing her. "Sometimes, I wonder at you. O ma n jo mi loju sa.[5]"
Motunrayo smiled, "If I don't tell you my honest thoughts, who else will?" she looked away from her friend and out into the small yard where the chickens were making an issue over the rice, "let her go. It will all be okay."

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Eyiwunmi pinched herself to stay awake. It was already 11.30 pm and she had school in the morning, yet she could not go to sleep. There was no way she would survive the beating that Beatrice would met out if she came into kitchen and found that Eyiwunmi had stumbled off to bed. She tried to amuse herself watching an ant make its laborious journey across the kitchen floor bearing its find of a grain of garri. She tried not to think of her mother and their house in Igede.

"Wunmi!" Beatrice's voice barked through the house and by reflex, she responded, her body jumping up and breaking into a small sprint in order to reach the woman before she got riled which was quickly and dangerous.
She made her way through the narrow corridor and into the Blue Sitting Room where Beatrice and her two partner's in crime, Alhaja Dubai and Sisi Lanko were cackling over another one of their ribald jokes. Trays of half eaten chicken lay discarded infront of them and the air reeked of heavy perfume, alcohol and cigarettes.
"Iwo omo osi yi i, se on ka mi lohun ni?![6]" Beatrice demanded immediately Eyiwunmi appeared. Immune to her unpleasantness and smart enough not to point out that she had appeared even before her name could be called a second time, Eyiwunmi dropped to her knees and immediately apologised.
"I am sorry ma."
"Useless girl, mase anfaani osi, ode buruku,[7] " Beatrice spat the words out with speed and ease, "whether your useless village mother has a house like this for you to be dallying in. Abi, what kind of nonsense, lazy girl is this?" she asked of her friends who regarded Eyiwunmi with scorn and disdain.
"You really need to wake up and stop being lazy, "Sisi Lanko told the kneeling girl, her tobacco rancid breath rumbling through the air to assault Eyiwunmi's nostrils. The girl did not even flinch; memories of what had happened the first time she had recoiled from the woman were still fresh in her mind. Instead, she nodded and tried not to stare at the woman's orange skin or her friend's bright yellow hair.
"I don't know what your father was thinking, leaving you here while he travels all over. I am sure he has gone to meet another one of his mistresses. Then he will be bringing his bastard children to come and pollute my household." Beatrice remarked unkindly.
"I have always said you are too nice." Alhaja told her friend, her gold tooth appearing periodically behind black-lined lips. Sisi Lanko nodded.
"Remove these and get out of my sight." Beatrice retorted.
Eyiwunmi quickly rose to her feet and did as she was bidden. As she slowly made her way out of the room and to the kitchen, she heard her stepmother say,
"That useless girl. I should send her back to that useless gold digger of a mother."
Her friend's commiserating mummurs were the last thing Eyinwunmi's heard before the door closed behind her. All she could see was the barely touched piece of chicken thigh that she would pounce on when she got to her room. Dinner had not been given to her and she suddenly felt some comfort as she remembered the small garri she had kept for herself.

Translations
[1] My friend, how are you
[2]That woman is only pretending
[3]What rubbish are you saying?
[4]You know how men are...
[5]You always surprise me
[6]You useless girl, are you wasting my time?
[7] Useless girl, good-for-nothing, retard

17 comments:

bumight said...

so why can't she return to igede Ekiti?

Ms. Catwalq said...

Bumight: pride, and humiliation is a potent mixture

Chari said...

hmmmn....

nkan beee....

Omo o le laso bi agba ki o tun lakisa bi agba...

Omo to ba so pe enu agba n run, o fe kabukun ni o...

hmmn...it is sad...the girl should jus swallow her pride and return home...but like u said pride , and humiliation is indeed a potent mixture...

Naapali said...

O ma se o, iru iya ti awon eda ma fin je omode.

Iwalewa McDaniels said...

she can't even enough the "better education" she is supposed to be getting with all that physical and emotional abuse. She shld just go back home to her mother.

ShonaVixen said...

m loving this and cant wait to hear more..there is going to be more right?

Queen of My Castle said...

This is why I don't think children should be able to decide which parent he/she prefers to live with.

Carlang said...

Lovely writing.
Love the dialouge.

Sigh.
Lets get married!!

Anonymous said...

Nice one catwalq.. u always write it right...
Candy

Lighty 'neferet' Kopearl said...

na wa ohh. its like that lagos life na war, this one that by force by fire she has decided to stay put.

this wicked step mother thing still dey??? na wa ohh.

about pride and humiliation. am sure if she returns home, nobody will know wot really went down except she says. unless she is too proud to tell her mother of her fate which i consider dumb!

eeya, well she will av to fight this one out. she seem not to mind anyway. content enuf so long as it is lagos not igede ekiti ey?

badderchic said...

havent been here in a minute. wats crackin?

Carlang said...

Our marriage is fueled by my love of your blog.
You really need to update soon..

Carlang said...

My sincere apologies.
It looks like i am the one who stands at risk of getting divorced.
How could i not have known you had finals.

Forgive me?

p.s DO geese see God?
Is also a palindrome!

NigerianDramaQueen said...

You did a great job with the narration on this piece. Great writing as always...
Have you read Khaled Hosseini's "A Thousand Splendid Sun's?"
This reminds me of the first chapter of the book

Afolabi said...

nicely written story..I'd love if Yoruba movies had this smooth narrative quality to them (and maybe then I'd watch).

Idemili said...

Bye bye sweetie!

I'm sorry I could not go around to all the blogs personally to say my thanks and say goodbye, but this is it!

Bye catwalq. Feel free to email me guys, if you need to keep in touch: Idemmili@hotmail.co.uk.

Jobs in Nigeria said...

Cant wait to get more gist..

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